T2W3 Journal Writing : Improving the School

Hi Everyone,

Last week, Mrs Nam spoke about the loss of things during CCA in the school. She invited the CCA leaders to come up with suggestions to solve the problem. For this week, I would like everyone to think of ways of improving our school. This could be the improvement in physical facilities such as the field, toilets, classroom, canteen, library, art room, computer lab and other facilities or the people who provided services to you such as the office personnel, teachers, book shop lady, school bus drivers and even the cleaners.

In short, you can think of any aspects of the school that needs to improve so that the lives of pupils will be better. To help you, I have listed some questions below:

1. Which aspect/s of the school do you like very much? Why?

2. Which aspect/s of the school do you think you dislike? Why?

3. What do you think can be done to improve it/them?

4. What other areas of the school should be improved?

5. How can pupils help in the improvement of the school?

These questions are just a guide to help you start writing. You are free to to give your own opinions and suggestions..I hope to read your suggestions soon.



Mr Ng


Today I am going t0 talk about improving my school.I like many aspects about our school.I also dislike some aspects about our school.Some aspects I like are the installation of a Wii Station,installation of the study corner,the computer lab,the cyber classroom (e.t.c).
The aspects I dislike are the toilet as sometimes it is smelly.According to me the toilet can be improved by the help of the students.The students should stop dirtying the toilet and soon it will also become an aspect that I would like.Besides that I think that no other areas need improvement.
As I have told above students play an important role in the cleanliness of the school.They should stop dirtying the toilet and soon the school will be a better place to learn.
That is all I have to say.I hope this blog post can help in the improvement of the school.